The Great Aim of Education is not Knowledge but Action - Herbert Spencer

I've been writing this story for the last 5-6 years, revising and changing it everyonce in awhile. If you like science fiction stories, or war stories you might like it, and if this generates any feedback I'll post more chapters. Thanks!






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Really good!! Hope you put the rest up! :)
I might finish chapter 3 tommarow that way I have a couple more chapters. There are also a few edits in the first chapter >.< but its a work in progress. Glad you enjoyed it =D



Also, Did you notice that you put B.C. on January 1st, but not any of the other dates?

Nice work, seriously.

Yep, you learn about it later on in the story, time is measured alittle bit differently, but as well the same. Thanks, it means alot. I'll try my best to finish chapter 3 tommarow then.

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